Saturday, February 13, 2010

Lead 4a

A Northwest Airlines Jet was evacuated today after smoke was spotted near the wheels.
Flight 428 carrying forty passengers was traveling from Minneapolis to Wisconsin when on arrival a LaCrosse Municipal airport a landing tower employee spotted the smoke.

1 comment:

  1. Good start, but get a little more of the key info in the lead. I'd add: 40 passengers (who) and LaCrosse Municipal airport (where).

    8.5/10

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