Saturday, February 13, 2010

Lead #5 Fact set #2

Actor comedian Chevy Chase appointed to the board of trustees as Brad College.
Chases appointment was announced during homecoming week festivities and he is well known as a famous alumnus of the college.

1 comment:

  1. This sounds like a headline, not a lead. The fix: Actor comedian Chevy Chase was appointed ....

    * Chase's appointment
    * Bard (not Brad) College - proofread!

    7/10

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