A small earthquake struck Santa Clara county today at 9:33am. No injuries or damage was reported. The epicenter was about nine miles northeast of San Jose city hall.
A good start, but see if you can fit this info into one sentence (or one sentence plus the short "no injuries" line).
* "9:33am" is not correct - check AP style and fix * I'd be more specific about the location of the quake. Say something like "struck the Santa Clara County foothills ..."
A good start, but see if you can fit this info into one sentence (or one sentence plus the short "no injuries" line).
ReplyDelete* "9:33am" is not correct - check AP style and fix
* I'd be more specific about the location of the quake. Say something like "struck the Santa Clara County foothills ..."
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